All Comments on 'Deal with the Enemy Ch. 03'

Are we going to find out sometime that Allison had put a hypnosis video on Melissa's computer? I can't think of any other reason something like this would happen even in a fiction fantasy, and that would make all this sound more like a possibility. Hopefully we will see a lot of humiliation other than just the weight gain.

Pappasleaze!

Quite an unusual concept but it makes for a wild story. I kept telling myself - its just a story - its OK to enjoy it. In real life I might be disgusted but you do a great job of story telling. I hope future chapters are longer... Reading this reminds me of seeing a video once on you tube of a beautiful girl getting her head shaved - I kept saying no don't do it (to myself) while I watched the beauty go bald. no, I am not suggesting little miss chubby goes bald - but it was sort of the same feeling. Train wrecks are hard not to watch