by Fairiegodmommie
Some of the comments are a little harsh. I find your writing interesting with extreme taboos which can be quite stimulating.
Somewhat stimulating and exciting. Yes, it has it's gross parts, but sometimes a little "dirty" stuff is exciting. I'd like to see more.
DON'T YOU WISH YOU COULD VOTE FOR MORE THAN A 5? SAY LIKE A MILLION OR SO??
Hot and such a loving warm giving love story. Great plot line and visuals to die for. I sure hope you go for another chapter or two or seven or eighty six-
This is a great story, although I think I read one almost word for word on another story site. Excellent story though.
Never mind the other dummies whom are overly critical keep up the story line or simular; not enough incest/scat. Maybe put a warning sign before the story so these other idots don't get offended. "If you don't like the subject don't read it and be fair to the author".
THIS IS BY FAR THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ HERE ON LITEROTIC.COM... KEEP UM CUMMING CAUSE I KNOW I DID!!!!!
Everybody who didn't the story and are just railing on it, STFU!!! Sure it could have been better described and catagoried but that still doesn't mean you have to attack it just because you don't like the subject matter. Just move on to something you DO like.
That story was so nice. I enjoyed Janet and Gloria sharing mom's pooh. I don't recall seeing the boy named, but to have such an open relationship with his mother is very intriguing.
It would be great if you continue with this story.
It has the potential to be one of the best scat stories here in Literotica.
Now I'm curious about how the narrator was brought into this by his mom, and how he talked Janet into it.
Die story hat mich und meine freundin so heiss gemacht, dass wir uns gegenseitig die verschissenen arschlöcher geleckt haben. Als sie kacken musste hat sie mir alles ins gesicht gegeben. Ich habedann ihren dreckarsch gefickt bis meine schwester hinzu kam, die uns beide richtig vollschiss.
This story is a rip off of a story published many years; ago called "Bringing Amy Home to Meet Mom". The only change I can see from just a quick scan is that the lad in the original story has been replaced by a girl to make it an all female story.
Only Four Stars because Im unable to eat anything when cheese is present