All Comments on 'Dear Random Soul Ch. 02'

Very good second chapter but you should have offered to lick Thor's cock clean and now deserve to be punished. And be sure to thank your perfect wife who goes out of her way to provide you with both the love and humiliation you need to feel useful.

If you were a man, you would dump the excessive baggage (your wife). And go start your life over again. But first things first

You need to man up, grow a pair of balls and dump the bitch.

Bahaahah! I didn’t realize this wasn’t posted in fetishes, no wonder you got hate.

But really, part 2 and 3 are great for a guy who’s far gone into the world of fetishes.

This is known for carrying a large hammer.

5*. It's obvious what you should do. You should thank Thor and offer to lick his cock clean after he cums in her.

Unless you enjoy being humiliated and it gets you all hot & bithered, GET RID OF HER--NOW!!!

There is no reason at all for you to stay around. Pack a bag & leave!

You need to stop this crap. A real man, regardless of his dick size, wouldn't just sit there and take their abuse. I'm not even sure you can still call yourself a man anymore. There are WAY too many cuckold stories on Lit and not enough stories where the cuckolded man has the balls to get away from the cuckolding woman, let alone get revenge on her. Do you know what pain, physical and emotional is? Pain is your body's way of telling you to get away from the situation. Fucking grow a pair so you can call yourself a man. Dump her. Hard. Use what little testosterone you have left in you and get pissed. Throw something, break something. Tell them both to get the hell out of your house. Divorce her. Basically, be a fucking man. Don't let these douchebags make you their cuckold. Cuckolds are weak pussies that don't stand their ground. Be a sports watching, video game playing, beer drinking, fast car driving MAN.

that was undone by the over the top Chapt 2. What coulda been a somewhat trufthful expose of your situation, you have decided to let us all know is pure fiction thru with this extravagance of humiliation.

I gave you four stars for Chapt 1, but this is a 1 star deal as it is just so ridiculous!

As I said in part 1...His attitute would make the story...His attitude destroyed it...I just say that his acceptance of what she did, brought him his pay!!!! He deserved all that happened to him...1*

Damn, but that was some boring shit. Basically a rewrite of every tired old cuck-wannabe tripe that has ever been written. Probably explains the shitty rating, tho, and make no mistake but that shitty rating was well earned. If this is an example of what the author does regularly, then the author needs to take up a different hobby.

How many would be "shrinks" there are in the comment section. Not only giving advice to a sick author but also to other readers. If you ask me, most of you need help. See a shrink as soon as possible. LMAO

you need to seek some mental help-this is something I would never do-it's sick

If you would have asked to give you a good beating then I would have offered my help to do so. But for that cheap crap you are writing here...

I go right along with Brit on this one. It was written to wind up the Anon community in LW. You did a pretty good job of it too gauging the comments. I can only imagine the emails, jeez! Thanks for sharing please continue...

Agree with MD4, It may read better in BDSM as is. In LW, it's expected that Big Dick would overtly humiliate you, eventually pop your cherry, and intro his pals, but, your darling needs to buffer her degrading attacks with sympathy to be relevant in LW. ie: "sorry you're (dick's) inadequate, but, love your substitute (oral) efforts". Perhaps in Ch 3 they can mellow and treat you better (in your mind) concluding that you are latent after observing your arousal when Big gives you a ride? Also slow the build a bit on your next story. Hot is the bait, but anticipation is the hook. ie: Ch 1 set up inability to satisfy except for oral, Ch 2 you and darling discuss fantasy Big (only d2p) notice unfamiliar creampie, Ch 3 intro Big, darling attitude and wardrobe change and accept cuck with more pie, explore your rational for acceptance. Save her ass, your 1st dick suck, BBC, asspie, descent into bi/homo fluffing 2hole toy for your new buddy Big for future CHs. Great theme and good writing. Last, not least, add a t-o-p caution to readers Re: fantasy vs reality. In real life, my wife loves my tongue in her ass more than my dick in her clam, but, she takes the arduous necessary precautions to increase my safety. A description of precautions is a sobering buzz-kill, but necessary in real life.

B. is right, this is just NN poking a lion in the eye with a stick .

I respect ID and everything he has written. Am very glad he got the joke.

Quite a few people have issues and comments is their therapy .

NN has some talent, I hope he writes something completely different. Like monty python says, lol.

AMerryMan

LOL Hilarious !!

I see what you are doing. Very creative, original .

Now, can you write something more ??

Looking for it as

AMerryMan

Your protagonist has no worth as a human being, just have him commit suicide in Ch. 03. This whole story is ridiculous self-flagellation.

I hate to tell you but there is nothing erotic about this story! This story belongs in the BSDM category because loving does not describe anything about this experience. Who in your life have treated you like this? You say that you do not want to throw away a good thing - what is good here? - certainly nothing in this story. You ask for help but the reality is that it is not your wife and lover who is the problem. The problem is you. Either you enjoy being with this woman who will abuse you (probably in new and disgusting ways) or leave her. Your wife is preparing for life of endless abuse and humiliation. This is the last story of yours I will read because I can no longer feel sorry for you and there is nothing enjoyable about reading about your choices.

I'm know that some get off on humiliation and being cuckolded but I don't get it? I personally like the idea of mmf threesomes and sharing my wife but need to be involved in the fucking, pleasuring my wife and in turn being pleasured by her. I can't get my head around how somebody can humiliate, deliberately degrade and hurt a partner and still claim to love them. Your Mrs is taking the piss. Kicking her out may give her a wake up call but don't take her back. Think a little more highly of yourself and get out there and find somebody worth loving!

Look cuckold, I can see you like to be humiliated and it is strangely turning you on. You ate a creampie and liked it. Your finally seeing the truth about your "average" cock. As I said in my first bit of advice, you can stay or go. She does not want to change. If you stay, you and your wife need to get your rules set. Admit that you like it, but you do not like to be treated harshly. That your willing to eat creampie, clean cock, suck cock, anything she wants as long as your involved in some way. Yes and for now you get to have sex with her in between her seeing Thor for his man meat. Or you can leave and know that women are going to cheat on you. But one way or another, your going to be cheated on or have a wife who is honest with you about her needs and wants.

quit being a fucking pussy and drug Thor if you have to and cut his cock and balls off then cut your wifes throat and shove the into her lungs

She doesn't love or respect you even tho you seem to think so. Why would any woman who loves & respects her husband make him lick another guys cum out of her ass after she fucked the other guy in front of her hubby?

Maria is POISON and if you don't get out NOW, you will lose all your self-respect and, not only will Maria & her lover laugh at you, the entire world as you know it will laugh at you.

Turn that feeling of humiliation into anger & dump her--FAST!!!!!

Thecarlinedream has an interesting story in their post. Perhaps Thor should wake up to fine all of his tackle on a saucer next to him in bed. I am not a fan of cuckold wimp husband's as I just can not get past the lack of respect the wife now has for her husband.

At the moment Thor has free pussy as he does not have to clothe, feed, support, care for when ill, shop, maintain a home for her. He just gets her for free.

He might not like her so much when he has to pay for her and lives with her !

The novelty of having Maria around all the time will soon ware off. As much as Maria likes his dick I am sure she will soon realise that he is also a complete dick !

And having a comfortable life will not be easy living with a dick who only thinks about his dick !

Thor will soon get bore of Maria and got find another piece of free pussy.

So the husband IMO should kick her out and she can go live in 1 bed hovel Thor calls a home.

Then husband books in for that penis enlargement operation. Then go find a petite woman to settle down with.

Maria will be the loser in this game and all for what, a ride on a big dick which will not pay the bills or a man she can grow old with. Maybe die with as she catches HIV from him because his dick will find its way into other woman.

I really do hope this is not a true story !

Loving It.

I sure hope this is fiction. If it is you can give it a successful last chapter with about 1200 words when you have Nick shoot the bastard's balls off while he is screwing the wife. Collateral damage is a risk the wife takes. I will say, you have hit the formula for getting comments. In the very unlikely event this is a true story, I suggest this remedy, said to have actually been used by a doctor in the 1920's. It seems Doc. came home to find a his wife and her lover naked and asleep on his bed. He apparently gave them both a shot to knock them out, but that is just guesswork. The known facts are that when the lover awoke,his balls were in a saucer on the bedside table. The way the story was told to me, the sheriff wrote it up as being done by someone unknown and the wife and the lover left the area. I believe the story is true, and while it would surely make your wife quit trying to humilate you, I wouldn't recommend doing it in today's world. The Lowcountry of the 1920's contained men with balls and Lawmen with a little common sense. Both are sadly lacking today.

C. U. C. K. ! ! !

This is a case of SPONTANEOUS CONVULSIVE VOMITING like some dude here is repetitiously mentioning.

You ask for advice, but is just a bluff, cuz' you shit head have your CUCK - COCK SUCKING - WHORE LICKING BRAIN and try to sale us your piss as rain.

HAVE ONE STAR and QUIT WRITING, like Baldwin said, YOU COCK SUCKING FAG.

Vanderdecken

I'm sorry, this wouldn't have gone anywhere near as far as it did, with the disrespect shown by both of them.

I'm waiting to see how you return the favor.

Nick, don't pay any attention to the jerk-offs that offer no helpful criticism because most of them don't have the balls or intelligence to write their own stories. They should realize that they won't like a story after reading a couple of paragraphs and stop. The fact that they continue to read shows they must like pissing themselves off or maybe pissing on themselves.

I will not read it. 1.6 point is near to the lowest................

I think Brit is right in a sense. Nick is pulling all our chains. I've never met anyone in real life that's as fucked up as the main character in this tale. When viewed that, way, this is just a laugh fest about a completely pathetic fucktard with absolutely no self-esteem. It's actually kind of creative with his whole "Ask people for advice" theme.

The content makes us all angry, so we try and help him out. I was guilty of that early on, too. Now that I know better, I'm just going to sit back with a bucket of popcorn and watch it all play out.

No sense of humor, and can't see when someone is winding you all up. How in hell you lot can't see what is happening here, I have no idea. Carry on Nick. Wind them up boy. I'm still wondering if you're really someone else in disguise????

Doesn't surprise me that Britease is actually encouraging scum like this to write, given the cuckold stories he's been putting out himself. His true colors are showing. How these writers detest the readers but where would they be without them. Nothing but a piece of trash on paper not worth reading.

If any guy ever put his dick in my face I would grab his nuts with one hand and punch them with my other until they were blood red and swollen so much that he couldn't walk. But that's just me. I guess I'm funny that way!!! You on the other hand are letting her treat you like shit. The women that took a vow to you. The women that says she loves you. What a load of shit. Any women that loves her husband would not humiliate him to tears. Leave the Bitch and end this stupid story.

leave her but plan something nasty to do to her

you are not man enough to live on your own... who walks you across the street and to work...

But considering the cruelty that you wrote, I can only surmise that you are a troll. And not a particularly good one, either.

just tell her to fuck of...she does not love you , she only loves the idea of humiliating you and living of you...go find a life elsewhere but before you go kick the big prick several times hard in the balls then piuss on him...grow up man

pud

No rating. Here's the bottom line. Either you're going to make this a willing cuckold tale with total humiliation or you're going to leave and end the marriage because she doesn't love you. I didn't use my normal language for women who do this. I also stopped reading tales like this because I want all willing cucks to die in pain. Make a choice or stop writing.

And then watch your back.

cease to exist , you are a virus that requires elimination

This was all a set up. No further comment, asshole.

This nonsense is so outrageous it's not believable. My best advice for you (real or not) is to do a murder suicide. You would be well advised to change your LitName because I don't think you'll have any audience left after this BS. Please don't waste my time any more. Go away.

I thought this chapter might reveal hubby has a backbone. He might as well bend over and take Thor up the ass. He likes the taste of Thor's cum drizzling from his wife's ass? Belongs in Fetish or Gay, as at least one other reader commented. Wish I could give less than one star. Dumb and dumber, not erotic. Won't read anything further by this author, waste of time.

Poison his drink, he would be fantastic as a decomposing pile of manure buried in the garden, plant roses around his grave and enjoy.

...because you don't really care what we say. You live perpetually in the hope that your wife will return your relationship to any aspect of where it was. She won't. This woman has serious problems and will never give you happiness. You do have the right to pursue a relationship with a reasonable person.

Please tell me she has not already made your choice for you, or are you a Little Boy in life as well as penis size?

I WOULD NOT TAKE IT THE FRIST TIME SHE BE OUT THE DOOR AND HE BE IN THE HOSP WITH NO BALLS

No sense reading this author's drivel any longer. Kept hoping for ANYTHING

positive but the fool seems to get off on our humiliation of his actions. No more wasting my time.

the guy gets off on the abuse, why help him jerk off?

This story sure does get you some attention(if thats what your after). If this story was or is true. WeLLLLLL, maybe you should see if a shrink can get you in A.S.A.P. Cuz you need some help. No, matter how good looking a woman is, or man. there is no reason for some one to heap that kind of degragation on some one they profess to love. Get out fast and find some one else. If this story is just your attempt to get attention, WeLLLLL, you succeeded, and more.Your one sick puppy.

Please don't write any more. From the bit I read this is beyond too terrible to even be posted on a respectable site.

Absolutely gets 5* for a Soupy Sales reference. It would have gotten 10*, but then there's the rest of the story.

Nick needs to get a girl friend or hire an escort and have a session with her. When Maria comes home Nick & date walk out the house and go on a date. Come home the next day after work. Tell Maria open marriage seems like a good idea. Variety is the spice of life.

.. .of the barrel. Always wondered what was left after you scraped through the bottom. Now I know.

If there's any hint of truth in this kick her ass to the curb!

great story! keep writing and keep it continued!

great bit of comedy, made me chuckle, i hope everyone reading this understands your sense of humour, you are getting people worked up with this saga, after all ,, theres no way your life could paralell this, is there, and if it does all i can say is shoot your fucking self so as we dont have to read anymore,,

Nick you can't leave her because you don't deserve her. You can't please her like Thor can so why would she have to put up with you when she can have Thor anytime she wants. Nick be happy that she lets you stay around, you are at least amusing to her and Thor. Maria has to be repulsed by your lack of balls and wimp sissy attitude. I think they will keep you for a while and then get bored of you and kick you to the curb.

And it didn't make the story any better. Just more ridiculous. And your dialogue needs some serious help. As for advice? Read the comments. If you feel her treatment of you was simply "inconsiderate" you have the IQ of a pea. And what "good thing" would you be throwing away if you divorce her? She has clearly demonstrated to you that she has neither love nor respect for you. She obviously doesn't care about your health since she is willing to expose you to ever social disease known to man. So if you're going to write a third chapter, it had better be to BTB to the ground and chop Thor (Thor? Really? That's the best name you could come up with?) up into little pieces. If you can't write that, e-mail Finishthedamnstory and I'm sure he'll be glad to finish your bitch wife off for you. By the way - if you can't figure it out, I gave your story a "1". This theme of the poor cuckold watching his wife taken by a bigger man has been done to death. Your story adds nothing to the telling.

Should be in Humor although the jokes slowed up before the end. Sad that some readers cannot separate reality from fiction.

Stay with a really awful woman you think just might still love you even though she gets more joy out of humiliating you than any other part of your relationship, or put on your big boy pants and get the hell out of there.

U said u would listen to our advice and I can guarantee that almost alll of us said to dump her, your character didnt. Which means he's a cuckold with no sense of self respect or independence from his henpecking wife. You sir have just lost a reader, seriously who the hell would voluntary drink another man's jizz from his own wifes ass if he wasnt a punk who cant say no. 1 star and thats only cuz there's no 0 option.

Keep to the words that suit you best "WACC".

Why should u get a response, u r a coward and deserve what u are accepting.

She love the main character? Really, how does she show it? Sorry failure and he is a loser and more than likely she is going to leave him anyway, she is just being a first class whore first

Really, and this is love. Divorce her and frankly why did the character do any of that is he really that much of a wimp? guess so. Sorry she doesnt love the main character at all, no one would who would give such an ultimatum then turn on him nastily

SHE DOESN'T LOVE YOU.

Get it?

Move on and find someone better.

Just dump the bitch she has no respect for you!

Instead of DEAR RANDOM SOUL should be titled.POOR SOUL.Nothing bad about sharing your wife,but all involved should treat you like a human being,not like a piece of crap.I hope this story is not true.if it is I feel sorry for you.Best wishes and good luck to you.

She told you that she would take his cock over you, then she humiliates you. I didn't read that she was with you when you woke up and you didn't write about how she treated you the next day. There doesn't seem to be any complexity or suspense here. She's big cock slut who needs to be with Thor. Of course, if he was such a good thing she'd be married to him. Move on. Besides, if you really wanted advice you'd fill us in on her thoughts beyond the fact that she likes a big cock and enjoys humiliating you. Most people who are not evil have positive intentions for bad behavior; but I don't see anything here but a wimp being abused. Maybe she thinks you're a masochist--sure looks like it.

Terrible story....must have been written just to provoke hostile comments.

Kill yourself you spineless WIMP.......

that I left a non-violent comment and you took it off. What are you afraid of: that I figured out you are pulling everyones' chain? I said nothing that would be offensive, and in fact you left up all the offensive remarks. I even signed it, unlike many of the Anons. Maybe you can explain before you take this one off.

Just leave.

Kill them both and bury the bodies deep.

id say mouse and i think even a mouse has more gumption that the hubby in this story has. may as well just commit suicide. if i was him id just do it in front of them maybe that will shock them enough to quit fucking for awhile

No human being male or female should have to put up with this disrespect, love has obviously gone, the only solution would be a divorce. Author, as to the category of the story, put it in Fetish and you may get some better scores, you must know this is a 'red cape to a bull' type of story to the Loving Wives readers. Perhaps that is your type of 'fetish' low scores and pissing people off.

I'm just saying this because I think it will give a good ending to the story... you don't have to like it I'm just trying-

Maybe Nick should bring up the idea of him also finding a lover, maybe a black lady... even white but I would prefer a black lady. They get together and Maria finds out and try to stop it, but Nick and the Lady don't stop, Maria get's upset and Thor tries to take over in a way that gets him hurt. Maria is now horney and alone because Nick is always busy with his new lady. Maria regrets her decision of finding a lover and tries to switch it around, by always dressing nice and trying to get Nick to come back to her. Then for instance... Maria can try and target the black lady(can burn her house down or whatever) and the black lady gets to stay with them. Thor recovers and doesn't wanna be with Maria because he finds someone sexier. Now Maria's getting what she deserves as a slut and has to watch Nick and the black Lady have sex all the time...

-I'm just saying, you can do whatever to the end. It's just a little something to really get the story... 'going'.

So far I think it can improve but it's usually not what I read because I know some people actually like this(which is disgusting) but oh well... that's my opinion, so I'm not going to put mean comments or anything.

Bye.

you don't have to get all nuclear on them .......just walk away. You don't love her, she doesn't love you. People who love each other wouldn't do what she does. People in love have more respect for themselves than you do

No real humans interact this way-nice try!

That story is pure garbage, one od the worse on the cuckold theme.

But reactions of readers are fun :)

Some of then are really offerring counsel ...

@ Harry in VA

Nick is just spouting the same deluded crap all the other cuck freaks spout to try and make it seem like their normal. They can scream that the BTB folks are really the ones in the minority till the end of time but none of the cucky stories ever score well, the only positive comments they get are nearly always from anon's and their pathetic drivel never makes it to the hall of fame.

I think the story stinks and you are a moron to consider being with the skank. She treats you like shit - so the fuck what that she may be beautiful when she evil and ugly to you. Anyway unless you competing for the lowest score possible I don't know why you continue. I did find you're seeking advice from your readers to be a unique pov. Blaming Lit for not posting right away not cool. Why did she marry marry you when she already had Thor?

Fuck no, asshole.

and you clam to have gotten 'so many wonderful comments?"

1.. You are fucking liar

2 You are mentally unstable

3 you dont understand basic math

when she already had Thor and his cock?

Get some balls and get revenge on THOR the asshole and then your wifeAD12

I do not believe three seconds of this whole story - it's horseshit from start to finish. But, if this is actually a legit, true story (and God, please don't make it so): Dude, when you said you're sticking it out because you "really love Maria"... that's a lie. You're lying to yourself. You do not love this woman. To be able to truly love someone, at the very least, you should have some level of self-respect, you have to be able to love yourself. And if there's one undeniable fact about any guy forced into a cuckold life, it's that they do not love themselves - if they did, they would all run away from this sick situation asap. But you didn't, which proves that you do not love her. What you are is afraid to be alone - that's vastly different. And even if Maria was truly the most beautiful of all the beauties on Earth, that just doesn't justify you to 'stick it out' - a ugly chick head-over-hill in love with you feels WAY BETTER than a beautiful chick completely degrading you.There's 3 billions chicks on this planet - just get another one!

You have two choices out of this situation, really: walk away, as plenty of folks (me included) strongly suggested on your first post... or kill yourself, Maria and/or Thor - I could give two shits about any of you (especially you, Random, who, frankly, is more responsible for this situation than anyone else), but this is how this mess is going to end if someone doesn't have the good sense to end it right now. I have no problem with willing cuckolds - if this is what you want, and you sign up your girlfriend/wife into it, that's your deal; but when you are blindsided into it? Fuck that.

Anyway, to recap: I truly think you're full of shit, Random, but if you actually are living in this hellhole, RUN AWAY FROM THE BITCH IMMEDIATELY. Take all your money out of your joined account (I bet a sucker like you have one of those...), go see the 20 best divorce lawyers in your town, to make sure she cannot hire any of them to face you, pick one of them, and let that lawyer loose on her, to make sure she will end up completely penniless. The good news here: you do not have kids together, so there's no reason to not have a clean break.

Looking for controversy not content. Let's see. If I can write the most dsigusting and outrageous story possible maybe I can get someone to notice me and my miserable life. Congratulation you succeeded.

Your like a diseased rabid dog! Just end it!

you need to just leave she dont love you it dont sound like she ever did. you can look for a good woman

Wind them up and enjoy yourself. The more you piss them off the more you must enjoy it. I wonder who you really are?

I hope this story is pure fantasy. If not Nick, you need some serious counseling. Better yet, why not divorce the bitch or set Thor on fire while he is fucking her. You could always claim spontaneous combustion and then collect on her life insurance policy. Get some help, Dude. This is not erotic. This is sick, sick, sick. And I agree with other commenters, this is sad cuckoldry and nothing less.

Get a little perverted sexual satisfaction of your own. You don't have to kill him. Just reduce him to a sniveling mass of tears with a very public face. Then drop the wife like the bad habit she is.

If it is, you're a moron. If not, end it. One way or the other. Divorce her "Yesterday!!" She has absolutely no respect for you and your life will be a living hell. Is that what you want? Hoping this is a sick joke. 1*.

As you will end up committing suicide anyway, soon enough. The extreme fetish humiliation that YOU ASKED FOR, by placating this woman's cruelty, WILL drive you over the edge, shatter your mind and lead you to end it all. You won't be strong enough for the divorce (or even annulment...it's only been a year as I recall), so with limited options and no pride left, and no ability to function in the real world after willingly sitting by and letting the pair of them destroy you- you will then finish the job and take yourself out. Will it be hanging? May be the sweet relief of a self-inflicted gunshot wound? Slicing your wrists IS messy, but then you can really enjoy the pain. Don't forget in the suicide note to Maria, to thank Thor for taking care of her. You just know that after reading it the first time, he'll fuck her in the ass again, so his cum can stain the paper after she wipes her ass with it (you know, now that you won't be around to clean it for her with your tongue!). If you are lucky, after the police get involved, MAY BE they will be smart enough to connect the dots and press charges for extreme mental cruelty. But, at least YOU won't have to worry about what anybody thinks of your pathetic life ever again.

I had to laugh at Nick in this chapter because he put himself in this drama. Was Nick abused or bullied growing up? I know he said he wasn't much to look at and have a small penis so I guess he can include not having any self esteem and a lack of balls. Nick doesn't know what love is. Once he figures out what that is then he will know he doesn't love Maria nor does she love him. He doesn't respect himself how does he expect Maria to give him any.

It appears Nick is going to stay with Maria and continue to be degraded and humiliated by her and Thor so what was the point of asking for advice. His situation isn't going to get better, it's only going to go downhill as long as he keeps Maria up on that pedestal.

He does know how to piss readers off with his cuckold tale.This piece of shit story drew more comments than most good stories worthy of comment. He actually got 2.30 stars on his first chapter, imagine that. There are some readers out that must have relished his tale to get anything over 1 star. Not surprising given the number of humiliating cuckold tales dumped into loving wives lately. Yea, cuckerotica at its best. Not.

that will keep us from seeing you on TV naked on top of a tower w a gun. And try not to miss any of your therapy appointments they're so important to all your neighbors (if you have any).