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by davebccanada

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good story!!

I have had the feeling with most of your Mike stories that the endings are a bit abrupt. This one particularly. Would have loved to read of the daughter “getting hers.” Makes the conclusion even more delicious…

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