All Comments on 'Debauchery Falls Ch. 12'

It was a great ride. Hoping to see more for you soon!

It was a great ending. I liked the focus on Halley and Graver, I've always found them the most interesting as characters and I thought this final chapter did a good job exploring how they've changed. Graver is a little more open and less stoic, thinking of Lucy and Galloway and turned on by his wife's lusts. Halley is certainly more vulnerable, still grieving Jessup and open to the idea of an affair. I'd love to see their wedding or their married lives in a future story!

And this story was great, it was a pleasure reading it. I can't wait for your next project!

only fiction but wow you made it feel so real can' wait for our next story brill

Great ending to a fantastic story. WELL DONE!

This story was a real roller coaster ride! Lots of excitement, plenty of heat. A great follow up to Hollow Pleasure. I hope you continue to write stories in this vein.