All Comments on 'Debbie Floats My Boat'

by phynneman

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EastCoaster1EastCoaster15 months ago

Nicely done... an erotic tale of young love and exploration that turned into a marriage of love until the death of his love...

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5 stars...

SwfloridaboaterSwfloridaboater5 months ago

Enjoyed your story, takes me back - although never had an experience quite like that!

Thanks for sharing.

MarielaniMarielani5 months ago

Well written story, thanks

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Lovely story. There is a wonderful Freudian slip on p.2: "Just be genital" for "gentle".

Cal59Cal595 months ago

Very good, thanks

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I like to write for fun but don't have a lot of free time to do it. I grew up in the Florida Keys near Key West, which is why my stores that center around boats and water are set in that location.