All Comments on 'Debbie's Conversion'

Not the best of your excellent works. The first part featuring Susan reads rather unconnected to the rest. The rest is well written, but IMHO too short for a "from reluctant to willing" story.

I agree with Phiro, a let down especially after Tau Geta Delta. Kind of a random start with the Susan stuff, I think if you gave more back story leading up to the scene you just shared, it could be a great story

Debbie is a Dream. I always love your writing.