All Comments on 'Deb's Adventure'

Barely literate , if at all. She put both heals on the dashboard? Why, did she get a disease from both guys?

Some people will say it's too short, some will say not much character development, some will whine and cry that you had a big dicked black man in it. But you know what's? Who cares? It's a sexy story of a guy watching his sexy wife play and they both got off on it. Good job.

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That Deb sounds as if she's a big fat looser with false teeth saggy tits and stretch marks all over her guts and arse and her big prolapsed saggy lip cunt well worn from riding coke bottles and the like then gets a black buck to pump a STD up her ,,,ewwwwww no thanks this story gave me a soft on.

Poor spelling, poor grammar, a lame story.

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You ask who cares? Apparently it's you. Why did you feel the need to whine about what others think? Let's be truthful here, shall we, it's you who got the problem not other readers. You whine, you bitch and you moan about opinions of others, but you don't seem to have one of your own, other than whine, whine, whine. Fuck off idiot.

Humiliation and degradation as sexual enjoyment. You must really hate yourself, and women. Sad.

This is the type of story most readers cum (oops sorry) come to this sight (damn, site) to read. (Wanted to but didn’t go with reed instead of read. but didn't) Some readers have different goals or turn-ons but isn’t it really about a sex story in one form or another. Wife watching,wife sharing, cheating wife with retribution (BTB) or forgiveness (RAAC). The one thing in common is the sex: whether it is inferred, soft core or hard core. These stories evolve from or revolve around sex. Writers create or recount events that they feel are exciting. It is the reader’s challenge to find stories that meet his/her personal interests.

As an overall evaluation I did note two or three sentence fragments, one punctuation error, three spelling errors, and the use of “heals” instead of “heels”. So maybe a D or C grade result. Oh crap, there’s a sentence fragment or is it an incomplete? Oh, just screw it!

I enjoyed the story and if you add to the tale I'll read it as well. Now I have to look at your Vet series.

Lit must be getting hard up to post all these willing cuckold tales. Sick stories written by sick authors. Not only are they not erotic but they're not even interesting challenging reading. And why do authors think adding interracial to a story in LW will make it more erotic?

The good is you described good sex in a hot wife marriage with no over the top stuff towards hubby

You need to smooth the flow of your narrative and dialog.

Thanks for posting!

WOW so hot. Could do without the color labels but to each there own.

Deb is sooo hot wish I had a wife who would act like that , my dream girl 😊

For someone who can use the internet you are really pretty dumb, you know. The fact that you come to a site and focus on a category specific dedicated to wife sharing, swinging, etc. and then complain about just that says that either A) you are really a total idiot who doesn’t understand how this site works or B) you are a complete jackass who is going out of his way to be a dick simply because other people enjoy something he doesn’t. My guess is B.

For every bar and dance club probably most nights there’s a girl taking a dick in a car or dark corner. Many married girls night out sucking a cock . How many woman think back to what sluts they were at times. Spring break vacations in Mexico, Florida , Texas etc . Girls were sucking cocks , fucking guys and taking more than one . Girls I knew that were good girls back home chocking on cock in the clubs . Crazy shitwonder how many regret it later on . I remember lying to this guy I knew he asked if I saw his long time girlfriend in Mexico. I told him yes every day he had nothing to worry about she was an angel like always. Meanwhile two of my friends fucked her half the week and her friend said that they ( the four of them ) fucked Mexican guys from the hotel the last night. They all switched which means they had four each. That talk had them four highlighted. I wouldn’t even casually fuck them even if they threw themselves at me. I told one that one night and she got pissed because I asked if she had any stds. She said they only got carried away on that vacation but that was one dick to many to know about for me. People can lie but when you see it it’s hard to get passed

I just want to find an author that has the hubby with the wife..instead of fucking behind his back ..how does this type of shit get into loving wives? There is no love involved in this cheating activity

To clarify to the previous commenter, who apparently either can't read, or can't understand what he does read, this was not cheating, it was loving and consensual.

Stuff like this happens in bars and clubs, and they both went in with open eyes