All Comments on 'Deep Down Inside Ch. 05-08'

by Odeon

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MajorRewriteMajorRewrite7 months ago

Steamy. Good tension. But now I’m wondering just how wimpy the husband is going to be.

WifeWatchmanWifeWatchman7 months ago
Excellent

Very intense and enjoyable.

HighBrowHighBrow18 days ago

Great writing. I am so envious…

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“Deep Down Inside” is up! This story started off as a novel length rewrite of the very first story I’d submitted to Lit. And while there are still some similarities, DDI quickly became its own thing. The last batch of chapters were a bit more rushed than the rest and might ...

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