All Comments on 'Deep Down Inside Ch. 25-28'

by Odeon

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MajorRewriteMajorRewrite7 months ago

It will be interesting to see if you have Kaden fucking her constantly, sidelining the hapless husband. In these stories the wife often goes away with her lover on a trip. She’ll probably be fucking Steve and BooBoo often too. Some restraint would be more interesting but long stories on Lit rarely finish before going way overboard. Ha.

jdl2848jdl28487 months ago

Best hate-fuck ever! I love how you mix in sex sounds with the dialogue. Really takes the dirty talk to another level :)

BuferBufer7 months ago

so fucking hot! More!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Excellent chapter

And on to the next conquest?

For Camille & Kaden

Continue on

Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Wow. You come back after 8 years and you spit out this epic. Kudos you waited this many chapters before she finally gave in fully and she’s still trying to resist !

WifeWatchmanWifeWatchman6 months ago
Excellent

Really enjoyed the sex between Kaden and Camille. My only problem was that Alex should've stepped in and said "Kaden, it's time to go." Anyhoo, I'm looking forward to more...

perversionsandtransgressionsfanperversionsandtransgressionsfan6 months ago

An epic concluding with probably one of the greatest chapter of cuck fantasies! all this because the characters stayed true to themselves.. Kaden never stopped being an arrogant prick.. camille never lost her resistance (yet finally gave in to her lust and Kaden's persistence).. the conflicted voyeuristic submissive loving husband that is Alex.. thank you

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“Deep Down Inside” is up! This story started off as a novel length rewrite of the very first story I’d submitted to Lit. And while there are still some similarities, DDI quickly became its own thing. The last batch of chapters were a bit more rushed than the rest and might ...

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