by Odeon
To me, Kadin is the main male character (Alex is just the narrator) so Travis, Graham, Steve and BooBoo are unneeded distractions. But that’s just me. The story is hot. 5 stars.
Ms., Camille has spent a night with older man stuntman Graham on his ranch,
After a horny Camille comes out to play on the cruise ship with 2 men Travis and Kadin.
While Kadin & Camille best new hate fuck sessions reaches new heights on the cruise ship. They just can't stay away from each other, but Alex and Camille have a strong marriage,
Camille's her own women. take that one Kadin, she; admits your good fuck buddy though.
Meantime, the liaison at Graham ranch should be interesting night for our horny Camille,
Great story of a loving cuck couple.
A small mistake was that in this chapter they got the name wrong, it's Kad"e"n and not Kad"i"n.
One detail I would have liked to see from Alex's point of view is him noticing Camille's wedding ring in her encounters in this episode and the previous one.
And my question is: will this be the end?
Because I think Camille and Alex are just starting their adventure and it seems to me that their story with The Beast would end very quickly and abruptly.
5*****
My only regret was that Alex didn't fuck Rose. Glad that Kaden got sloppy seconds, though.
Honestly one of the stories I’ve read on this site.
Hopefully you keep going
Great story, well written and very exciting. Lots of sloppy editing: use of the childish “masterbating” instead of the proper masturbating and inconsistent naming: Kaden is suddenly Kadin.
A really great series, with an amazing amount of build up and a worth payoff. Overall, very well written, but things got a bit convoluted and that buildup drifted. But, given the size of this series, such issues are understandable. Again, given the length of the series I understand the need to provide sexy points of intrest along the way. Unfortunately, for me, this resulted in Camille's character becoming a little less nuanced. When we meet her she is the strong, bright, beautiful and formidable woman. The kind that wouldn't put up with any man's crap. By the end, we learn that this is a practically band new persona. Having, up until that point, been a totally rampant devourer of all the asshole men she had ever known. I had hoped that it would have been note focused on the unleashed of her most repressed desires, rather than purely reverting to her previous life. Not that I didn't like her having a secret past, just that it needed to be smaller (but more intense) in scale. It was still a really great story. Unless I missed it, I do feel we were due some Camille butt stuff. Lots of unforfulled Chekhov's anal!
Yes, well-written, but got a bit tedious by the halfway mark for me. Skipped to the end hoping to find an HEA, but it fizzled.