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by BlossomedAngel

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bredrebredreover 12 years ago
More please

Very good start

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

It was a great start with a couple mistakes (Hunter not Jayden)but still a great read. keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good start bad ending...way to short

Thumbs down on this, shame

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice start

Great start hope you come back and continue writing :)

BlossomedAngelBlossomedAngelalmost 12 years agoAuthor
ITS coming..

Thanks for the feedback guys...ur awesome been EXTREMELY busy with the studies. Keep a look out; Mid-June I'll put up the rest of this story.So chuffed.;-D

StaggeredHeartsStaggeredHeartsalmost 12 years ago
Cant

Wait for another chapter

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