All Comments on 'Deep Secrets'

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StaggeredHeartsStaggeredHeartsabout 12 years ago
Cant

Wait for another chapter

BlossomedAngelBlossomedAngelabout 12 years agoAuthor
ITS coming..

Thanks for the feedback guys...ur awesome been EXTREMELY busy with the studies. Keep a look out; Mid-June I'll put up the rest of this story.So chuffed.;-D

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice start

Great start hope you come back and continue writing :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good start bad ending...way to short

Thumbs down on this, shame

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

It was a great start with a couple mistakes (Hunter not Jayden)but still a great read. keep it up.

bredrebredreover 12 years ago
More please

Very good start

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