All Comments on 'Defiled: Me'

I loved this story! Poor Tye being hurt like that. No wonder he was so awkward and mean. And, constantly being rejected must have reminded him of his ex. They both need to kick Greg out . I hope Tye gets his happy ending!

its perfect

I loved it. Very well written. I hope that the end will be a happy one. Please make it a happy one

This is a very good story, and I admire your writing. Poor Tye. But I suspect there’s a happy ending in store for him!

Wow this story was a rollercoaster of emotions. I really like the whole dom and sub thing between Tye and Nick. I guess I just stumbled upon a new kink. And man do I feel for tye now after meeting his Ex. Yeeesh.

You gave a warning of a dark story so I prepared myself. Tbh it was a really good love story with other lightly dark/hot pieces.

Did I like this, OMG Eraj like doesn't begin to cover it. Of all of the stories of yours that I've read, this has got to be the most powerful. This was SOOOO GOOD! Throughout most of the story my feelings of Tye were the same as Nick. I had my own similar tormenter at that age who I both hated and desired at the same time, so I totally understood how he felt. You did a tremendous job at changing Nick's perception of things after he became ill. Greg's desertion and Tye nursing him back to health showed both of them in a different light. Finally with the very unlikable Jamie entering the story Tye easily went from villain to victim. Can't wait to read his POV. I never read any of your stories that weren't five stars, but this one deserves ten time that amount. MLF

This was a wonderful story! One of the best I have ever read. You truly had me hanging on every word and I had to read the whole thing in one sitting just to find out what happened. Can't wait to see the next part and really hoping for an ending that I can like. I'm going to have to look at some of your other work after reading something as good as this. Thank you so much for sharing

Wow, I didn't read such a story for a long time here!

okay, I enjoyed this a lot... was expecting it to be dark because of the warning but it's actually quite sweet, with a bit of bdsm kinkyness thrown in. It was obvious from the beginning that Ty was into him and jealous of Greg

In the beginning I wanted to give it only one star, because it was much too threatening and scary for my taste. Then it turned out to be super sexy and one of the best stories I have read here. Very well done - I can't wait for part 2!!

@Anons

You know me too well, I love HEA's but on occasion I do also HFN :)

@ChrisTheCoco

Haha, yep, he isn't the nicest person on the Earth :D But I'm glad you enjoyed it!

@Anonymous

"You gave a warning of a dark story so I prepared myself. Tbh it was a really good love story with other lightly dark/hot pieces."

If you read my other stories, you know why I warned my readers :)

They are mostly vanilla, sweet/corny romances, so this story is rather different. ;)

@MLF

I'm sorry about your tormenter, this sucks, and I'm happy the story gave you pleasure anyway :)

The Tye's POV next week ;) Stay with me!

Michrick1

My other stories with the exception of Underneath, Mobster Toy and Damaged are mostly vanilla romances, nothing of this type :) But I thank you kindly for your interest in my works ;) I appreciate it!

@Anon

Thank you so much!

@Anon "In the beginning I wanted to give it only one star, because it was much too threatening and scary for my taste."

Exactly for that reason I gave the warning at the beginning and as you can see, some people think it wasn't even that much dark and twisted :) People perceive things so differently :)

But thank you so much for reading and giving the story a chance.

@readerfeeder

Thank you for kind words :)

As you can see above, some people still think it's too scary, so there is really no good way to prepare a warning in such a way that all readers would be content with it ;) Believe me, I struggle a lot to write it! :D

I warned readers that there are d/s elements and "unlikely romance element", so I just hope, most people will interpret it right. ;)

In reading it I stuck around because it was a good romance but as someone who has a huge turn on for cheating, especially getting caught, I was totally rewarded with the Jamie part. I loved it, him being a villain made his inclusion digestable for the heavy hearteds. It aslo adds a bit of realism too. In my own relationship it was picture perfect, beautiful, sacrificing, enduring 5 years of living apart just to be together. Everything you'd want in a love story to die for ... until it wasn't. I became a Jamie after an interally induced rough patch I didn't handle well. Even excusing my own actions as justified like him. It changed me. I hate it and struggle between being a Nick at heart but a Jamie when it becomes overwhelming. That's why I like good story like this that allows me to scratch that itch while I try to be better. Thanks for the lovely story, well written, great balance.

amazing! wow, i definitely like the devlopment though, domination is hot but so is a sweet side :p

@Anon

Thank you for your honesty. I'm glad my story touched something in you. I wish you joy and peace of mind in your private life. 😘

I appreciate the A/N warning and I can see a few things that could be considered a trigger, but, it’s a very good story. And sorry, eraj, you’re to kind hearted to get too dark. Your humor slipped through more than once. Despite their unusual situation there’s love (or at least lust) pushing to the surface as this chapter closes. Looking forward to Tye’s perspective. I bet there’s a bit more pink to it …Your fan, Dan

Dang that was a good read. Man I really liked that.

Eraj, it's very bad you didn't make Tye pop the cherry of Nick. But I am generous so 5 stars this time.

Loved this! Great job, I was ready to kick Jaimies butt myself😂

sealandssd, why should he?

I really got swept up in the story. You do a great job of putting the sex in sexual repression. Really fine writing.

What a complicated and arousing story, a rare BDSM romance, true jewel!

The story is so captivating, I couldn't tear my eyes from the display till I reached the end, so good, and super hot!

A very interesting story, wonderfully written, suspenseful, emotional and changing feelings ... for individual characters. However, I have become the closest person to Nick and in most situations I would like to be him. I really liked the person of Greg, he was very responsible, masculine, friendly to Nick until he ran away when Nick was ill. He put his career ahead of Nick's health, or maybe life. Now I understood why Tey was so unfriendly and even hostile towards Nick, such betrayal hurts a lot and you carry it with you all your life. For most of the story, I didn't expect Tey to take care of Nick during his illness. I am already very interested in how the fate of Nick, Greg and Ty will turn out and what will result from their life together? Greetings from Poland, SissyBoy from Warsaw.

Bardzo interesująca historia, wspaniale napisana, trzymająca w napięciu, emocji a zmieniająca uczucia ... do poszczególnych bohaterów. Jednak najbardziej zżyłem się z osobą Nicka i w większości sytuacji chciałbym być nim. Bardzo odpowiadała Mi osoba Grega, był bardzo odpowiedzialny, męski, przyjazny do Nicka aż gdy uciekł w momencie choroby Nicka. Postawił swoją karierę nad zdrowie a może życie Nicka. Teraz zrozumiałem dlaczego Tey był taki nie przyjazny a wręcz wrogo nastawiony do Nicka, taka zdrada bardzo boli i nosi się ją w sobie przez całe życie. Przez większość historii nie spodziewałem się że to Tey zaopiekuje się Nickiem podczas choroby. Już bardzo Mnie interesuje jak potoczą się losy Nicka, Grega, Tya i co wyniknie z ich wspólnym życiem? Pozdrawiam z Polski, z Warszawy SissyBoy.

@SissyBoy,

Thank you for your opinion, I'm glad you were surprised with Greg attitude, I hope it kept the story interesting for you ;) I hope next parts would be to your liking also!

Dziękuję za Twoją opinię, cieszę się, że zmiana w zachowaniu Grega Cię zaskoczyła. Mam nadzieję, że to podtrzymało zainteresowanie historią. Liczę też na to, że następne części Ci się spodobają.

As a straight female I am never sure why I love MM sex stories so much, maybe because they are not as tender. And while I love a good BDSM story as well this belonged in non con/reluctance con. But damn it was done well. I didnt like Tye but could see he was hurting from the start. I really could see Greg was trying to a little to hard and Jamie has so much internalized homophobia. I hope you dig deeper into these subjects and work through more of it. I will be watching for more.

@WitchyUrsula

Thank you ❤️, the events in the next parts will reveal more about this characters, hopefully it will surprise you 😜 I personally like tender gay stories but there are very sparse...

It was dope

@Princera

The story gets more dark with the next chapter, it may not be to your liking further down the plotline...

So great!!!! This style was definitely different but amazing just the same!!!

@Sammy, I'm happy you like this also!