All Comments on 'Delightful Dana'

Meh. Kind of boring, not much more than boilerplate cliche. Less than five followers per story, not a very good average.

I really enjoyed reading your story. It told what real life can be like.

I hope you have several follow-ups in the series to show the growth of Ed, along with changes in Dana to improve their partnership. Starting with communications between each other.

Your imagination basing this on previous military friends reminded me of my time in military. Many many smiles and fond memories.

In my opinion swinging can be fun, but only if both partners are honest with each other to include sharing of their own thoughts and feelings.

Keep writing

JH4Fun

Everyone needs a delightful Dana.

Pphhhhfffftttttt.

Really?

based on fact....yeah so many others here are as well.

If this was indeed based on fact it read like those other ones, a little boys wet dreams and judging by the wet diapered intro, between the two you must have a diaper rash by now.

A believable swingers plot. Well-written with good character development. Good use of a stereotypical, "wham-bam-thank-you-Mame and roll over and go to sleep guy." Trishes higher expectations were well used. The sex scenes were okay, but only okay Waiting for the next installment.

No LW in this pack of baboons.

I see you have mixed comments here. Hell, 5 stars with delightful Dana. Good stimulating story.