All Comments on 'Delivered Ch. 03-04'

Chapter 4 clearly ends by setting up the next installment. I hope there is no serious difficulty that kept you from continuing, but on the other hand, if not, your "her" needs to take you down to the basement rec room.

I have enjoyed your story so far. JQGraves

P.S. I've never read a story with a higher concentration of sentences beginning with a gerund.

I'm very excited to see how this story progresses... As a slave in permanent chastity, stories like this only serve to stoke the fire on my unquemched desire.