All Comments on 'Delivery Pt. 01'

by Willowifey

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Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesover 4 years ago
Some parts are GOOD -

Some others, not so much. I do not condone RAPE, but I do like to read about loving sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
There no fucking way anyone would walk in and start tucking a stranger.

Unless the dude is a fucking rapist, of course; but in general, we wouldn’t fuck a woman who was tied up.

Not to mention how sore she would be from being bent over and tied up for hours, or the fact that she would be thirsty, hungry and have to puss kind a racehorse: like da puts a damper on getting fucked by the pizza delivery retard.

TwentysevenTwentysevenover 4 years ago
Very Promising

Hardly plausible but very well-written, so I'll suspend my disbelief. Don't disappoint me with a bunch of cliches and childishness.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Just

I am interested in understanding just why you felt that this story fit into LW. Seems to be a bit of a stretch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
26thNC have you read the description of LW recently?

Extra marital fun swinging swapping and more

It works, especially as the series goes on it seems it's going to move to usual LW fare.

If you're going to knock the author's choice why not make a suggestion? IR or non con both work, fetish or BDSM to a lesser degree as the bondage was a 1st and probably last experience.

As for her being a stupid cunt, why leave the door unlocked does the husband not have a key?

oldtwitoldtwitover 4 years ago
Good story

What a great story, loved this idea and sound of her.

CZOFTWCZOFTWabout 3 years ago
Great story!

I can't wait to read the next chapter and hope you keep writing

irinmikeirinmikeabout 3 years ago

Very original and sexy! Only flaw is how the wife tied herself up. Husband’s reaction quite pridictable for all but those few with an imagination

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Sitcom but it was original and sexy af

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

thats funny shit ,i quest she is blond .

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