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by JaxRhapsody

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FlynnTaggartFlynnTaggartover 2 years ago

Low score. Its a pretty out there story which isn't a complaint, sometimes weird is fun just to read compared to the piles of vanilla stories even if its not my taste, but the twist at the end of Dennis going through all that and not getting his revenge annoyed me.

Lovecraft_LoreLovecraft_Loreover 2 years ago

I had to give this one 4 stars, and I hate not giving it a 5.

It is a revenge story without revenge and I just hate that so so much. He would have been better off just shooting them then letting the demons take him away.

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Jax Lazzo Rhapsody, just trying to get my stories known. This is essentially an experiment in my craft of writing. I will be trying different things here and there. I concluded this was on of the best sites, although pretty archaic, is simple to use. I'm trying to expand, lea...