All Comments on 'Demon Child Ch. 07'

by Xantu

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Jedi_KhanJedi_Khanover 15 years ago
Excellent

I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it comes out soon.

HonourHonourover 15 years ago
As always

An excellent chapter well written.

StephenspetStephenspetover 15 years ago
Wonderful

sister of my heart,

you never cease to to beautiful work. This story is wonderful and i only wish i could read it as a complete novel. It's so hard to wait for the next chapter to come out!

Zodia195Zodia195over 15 years ago
Nice

I think one of the most important things of a story is the growth of the main char and you're doing a great job here.

DragonDreamerDragonDreamerover 15 years ago
I almost missed this!

But then, I've been working an awful lot lately and haven't had much time to wander through the site. A wonderful continuation - I'm looking forward to much more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Yay

Seems like I've been waiting forever, but it was worth the wait. Thank you for another great chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Content

I think this is a very intersting story. I know this is a erotic story web site but your story also has content alongs side "creative Writeing". ;)

AnnOnymousFantasiaAnnOnymousFantasiaover 14 years ago
Great!

I love this story - the whole setting reminds me of a mix between "Clan of the Cave Bear" series by Jean Auel (Neesha reminds me of Ayla) and David Eddings' Belgarian/Mellorian series. Great job!

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
What a fine storyteller you are.

The story of Neekah flows effortlessly across the page. It captivates and excites. It's a fine piece of work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Dry opinion

Boring still.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
WHY KEEP READING IT THEN!!!

Awesome story!!!!

FridayschildFridayschildover 11 years ago
I am amazed

That the anon with the 'dry opinion' continues to read. I think this story is very engaging and is well told.

BigotedeFocaBigotedeFoca10 days ago

Wow, finally allowed to rate your tale. Wonderful writing.

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