by Xantu
sister of my heart,
you never cease to to beautiful work. This story is wonderful and i only wish i could read it as a complete novel. It's so hard to wait for the next chapter to come out!
I think one of the most important things of a story is the growth of the main char and you're doing a great job here.
But then, I've been working an awful lot lately and haven't had much time to wander through the site. A wonderful continuation - I'm looking forward to much more!
Seems like I've been waiting forever, but it was worth the wait. Thank you for another great chapter.
I think this is a very intersting story. I know this is a erotic story web site but your story also has content alongs side "creative Writeing". ;)
I love this story - the whole setting reminds me of a mix between "Clan of the Cave Bear" series by Jean Auel (Neesha reminds me of Ayla) and David Eddings' Belgarian/Mellorian series. Great job!
The story of Neekah flows effortlessly across the page. It captivates and excites. It's a fine piece of work.
That the anon with the 'dry opinion' continues to read. I think this story is very engaging and is well told.