All Comments on 'Demon Child Ch. 07'

Wow, finally allowed to rate your tale. Wonderful writing.

That the anon with the 'dry opinion' continues to read. I think this story is very engaging and is well told.

Awesome story!!!!

Boring still.

The story of Neekah flows effortlessly across the page. It captivates and excites. It's a fine piece of work.

I love this story - the whole setting reminds me of a mix between "Clan of the Cave Bear" series by Jean Auel (Neesha reminds me of Ayla) and David Eddings' Belgarian/Mellorian series. Great job!

I think this is a very intersting story. I know this is a erotic story web site but your story also has content alongs side "creative Writeing". ;)

Seems like I've been waiting forever, but it was worth the wait. Thank you for another great chapter.

But then, I've been working an awful lot lately and haven't had much time to wander through the site. A wonderful continuation - I'm looking forward to much more!

I think one of the most important things of a story is the growth of the main char and you're doing a great job here.

sister of my heart,

you never cease to to beautiful work. This story is wonderful and i only wish i could read it as a complete novel. It's so hard to wait for the next chapter to come out!

An excellent chapter well written.

I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it comes out soon.