All Comments on 'Demon of the Paliquish Deepwood'

My second story. It's set in the same world as the first 'a rather fecund estate' but each story is a stand alone. That's kind of my plan for the moment writing short stories set up in the same world with some recurring characters. I hope you all like it :)

This is a good series and your writing is very enjoyable. bravo.

A supernatural creature of the forest getting tamed and impregnated by a human? More, please! I’m curious about this fascinating world you’ve created, the Umbral species, the so-called Night Mother (their progenitor or something else), their “tenders”, and of course Ponce and everything about him.

"More powerful than a lion." Even though he has a lion motif, I'm guessing he's actually a dragon since he is so op and has more knowledge than he should have at his apparent age.

Also, it's taut, not taught. You can't teach a pregnant belly to swell up.