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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Keep it up you magnificent bastard and also any tips on writing I have no idea how to make it good

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loving this! Can’t wait to see the other changes that befall her.

Through_Burning_EyesThrough_Burning_Eyesover 2 years agoAuthor

I'm glad you're enjoying it!

As for writing tips... read ravenously, remember that it's easier to fix a crappy draft than it is to write anything from scratch, and if you're unsure about a passage try reading it out loud.

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