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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Keep on writin'!

Sure, I've read better, but I've read worse too! Experimental is always good so don't stop with this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Exellent

I've personally had fantasies like this but the tentacles were gold, very sexy and the submission was beautiful. 5/5, sequal is needed.

PS:Expirence against innocence is the best set up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

You've got some good stuff happening here, but need to work on grammar and sentence structure.

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