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by PaulaApril

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Telugu1Telugu1about 2 months ago

WoW What a wonderfully erotic adventure! Perfectly written with the right pace. I loved it and could quite easily have read more but the conclusion was a natural one so thank you for writing and sharing. Rated 5 * x

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Perfectly written? Hardly. Drawn out. Too wordy. Typos and poor grammar. 2* from me.

NEthingGozeNEthingGozeabout 1 month ago

As always, you write a wonderful story that is similar in its excellence yet different in your choice of characters, situation and plot. You never disappoint. Ignore the naysayers, you girl can write.

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userPaulaApril@PaulaApril
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Amateur author of erotica. My stories are sometimes an outlet for my deviant or bi-curious thoughts that I'm too nervous to try in real life. May be one day. Some collections and longer works are available on Amazon Kindle for anyone who wants to add my work to their library.