All Comments on 'Den of Iniquity Ch. 08'

This reader's completely...unbiased... yes, that's it, unbiased opinion, is that this story is wonderful... simply wonderful. If you haven't read His chapters from the beginning, be kind to yourself and start from Chapter One. It's amazing.

God! I can't wait for this party! What's gonna happen??? Hurry up, pleaasseeeee!!!!!!

...with this chapter, like those before it, is that it ends too soon! You make it soooo hard to wait for the next one. Please write more soon! We're squirming out here waiting for it.

-- Bitch

I love to see this finished and bound into a book that I may hold in my hands.

I am enjoying the whole story arch.

Don't read it - you'll be as hooked as the rest of us, it's just too good. He even teases us with the length of time between His chapters. Soooo wonderful!

Sir Nathan,...the vision of that ceiling and pulley system...lovely ending, leaves me wanting. ... Excellent writing..great form, and great story. I love the egg too.

*g*

Everyone who wants more NOW, write their name down and say "More! More!" *giggles*

I'll be first... MORE! MORE!

hehehehhe god it's so good

This series is one of the best I've read on Literotica... not just good sizzling sex, but a plot too. Keep it up please.

i am so amazingly grateful that i found your incredible stories after the chapters are finished. i can only imagine the torture of having to wait for the next installation.

Your stories are remarkably written, erotic, enticing, intriguing, pure delight. Thank you for sharing them with us. ~~ beth claire

As usual the chapter is fantastic. Makes you feel as if your part of the story. It certainly gives me ideas. ~Blessed Be

I really like your writing style very much. I found this story singular, in that the first part can stand alone as 'pure' literature (read: great writing) and the latter part as highly erotic, yet without the 'seediness' that can accompany erotic writing. I particularly like that you gave your characters 'charater.'Your tansitions are excellent, your sentences are direct yet well-constructed. You clearly like women (I know, but really, it is a rarity, sad to say) and you are, most certainly, a 'natural dominant.'

Please, Sir...don't stop! :)

From thalia_60, fellow Literotica user and writer

I know you say you love when we take the time to write comments....I know Ive beeen writing alot. Its just all the same. I love this series...lol This was a nice intense...Teasing myself by reading this at work :O

this is a great series and i enjoy your writing with excitement. each chapter is delicious.

A far cry from the dirty B novellas found here normally. This was fun and light. I adored it.

This is a wonderful story. I have been erect since I started it

I am loving this story, Sir Nathan. Absolutely lovely!!

You're a very good writer, Sir. I love the story

I accidently tapped the screen and rated this story 1 star. My apologies to the writer

I don't know ho w it happened- but I just fucking frigged to this story. And I'm still horny af. I know Annie is a fictional character, but I hate that she has Roger instead of me.

Thank you for making my night.

I’m reading this in 2019. I’ve noticed that you haven’t posted anything here in a long time. When this is over I’ll miss Roger. This has been really fun