All Comments on 'Descent into Depravity Ch. 03'

Wow. Just wow.

fantastic story!!! i wonder since mom didn't seem too upset at the pictures does she know the enigmatic Jennifer\?

JESUS!!! This story turns me on more than I can say. I'm not into BDSM that heavily, but for some reason this really hit me. Halfway through the story I had to stop and clean up, I was leaking so much. Even though the Dom thinks he controls everything, you showed that it's actually the Sub that holds the real power. The only part of the story I had a problem with was sending the pictures to the parents. I thought that was completely unnecessary and could have had even worst consequences. Hope you're planning a chapter #4, ***** again. Thanks, MLF

I was half expecting Dad to be one of the audience and to accidentally find himself fucking his son after a blindfold had been removed. I think dad would come around if he had chance to experience his son and Petey together

Like another poster said I think overall the story was *very* hot and well done but a few constructive criticisms: 1. For the love of gawd please get an editor the spelling and grammar is bad. It reaks of a non native English speaker or a new writer (nothing wrong with either of those but each definitely requires a proof reader). 2. Don't involve the family you main character was already primed to enter the stable *willingly* no need to involve incest or shame (not to mention there is no reason to be ashamed of his *chosen* activities).

Other than that great job.