All Comments on 'Desperate times'

i enjoyed thar. hope there are more chapters

Ok start, but what a don't get is if she hates the Taste of come so much, why in the hate would take it in her mouth just to give a snowball? She could have just Scooped it up with her hand and feed it to him..

This is an interesting story that has potential. A little rough in places but I enjoyed it and would enjoy reading more.

Thank you for writing and posting here.