All Comments on 'Destroy and Rebuild Pt. 06'

Weak male humiliation with racial to emphasise a crude predictable work of subhuman intent.

Go Away sick one.

I love it when "writers" with marginal talents to begin with start defending their "writing" against the commentary they themselves invite. If you don’t want commentary, “writer,” turn that option off. LOL

The fact is, this whole "story" is infantile in concept and so poorly constructed as to evoke laughter (rather than contempt) at the writer's sickness. The concepts of logical paragraph construction, proper punctuation, and the simplest rules of grammar are totally lacking. This deplorable attempt at writing should be passed over because of the writer’s incredibly poor craftsmanship – never mind the fact that the story line has been so often used and discredited by anyone with an IQ greater than his shoe size. This “writer” hasn’t yet figured out his pitiable wet dreams do not a story make. In short, this thing is absolutely pathetic.

“Writer,” please make your Chapter 7 just two words – “The End.”

Does it make you feel superior by your own words? Does disrespecting others and yourself excite you?

Your stubborn racial despicableness defeats any favorable attempt to arouse.

Destroy And Rebuild - pluleeze. Take a white pill and get over your headache caused by your perception of racial inequality which makes you a racist by your words here.

You have talent - so why do you flog yourself in this self induced quagmire for the very few?

Interracial can be hot - but this is not - just deeply disrespectful.

Written by Bob McDill, Performed by Don Williams

First I get cold then hot

Think I´m on fire

But I´m not

Oh, what a pain I´ve got

It must be love.

There´s nothin´ I can do

All that I want is you

Look what I´m goin´ through

It must be love.

It must be love

It must be love

I fall like a sparrow

Fly like a dove

You must be the dream

I´ve been dreamin´ of

Oh, what a feelin´

It must be love.

Somethin' is wrong

Alright

I think of you all night

Can´t sleep till mornin´ light

It must be love.

Seein´ you in my dreams

Feelin´ you close to me

Oh, what else can it be?

It must be love.

It must be love

It must be love

I fall like a sparrow

Fly like a dove

You must be the dream

I´ve been dreamin´ of

Oh, what a feelin´

It must be love.

I am going to read more of your stories. You have a nice style. Keep going with the interracial theme. It's very sexy and for fun it pisses off the racists. Judging by the intesity of the moronic negative comments from the troll gallery you are doing a good job.