All Comments on 'Detention'

I especially love how careful you are too protect your play partners, while still being completely sexy. Thanks for writing.

I’m sure you, the author, realize the irony of using a complex grammar lesson in a story that would not be able to pass the same scrutiny utilized in the story itself. This narrative is riddled with all sorts of grammatical mistakes.

Janette is a freak. She admits that she basically needs to be raped to achieve orgasm. Where will she be in 20 years when people like Dmitri no longer find her attractive or a good play partner? Will she still resent her husband when he is the only one who will take care of her?