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eh9198eh9198almost 2 years ago

Amazing! Just wish she was married, not engaged. This was fantastic. Please write MICH more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Sorry I stopped eeading after the first 2 or 3 paragraphs I found it was distracing to see that you had used the same character`s names Jenn and Jamal as in a previous story but not as a follow up or pre-quell

You are a better writer than that with a good imagination!

May try this one again when theres a longer gap between the 2 stories

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Would have been better without Kira, she was a distraction and did nothing for me. Also there should have been raceplay, lots of it.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

It was fantastic! Raceplay would have ruined it. Please don’t do that!

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