All Comments on 'Devious but Dutiful Wife Ch. 01'

by Reardensteel57

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Gotta call bullshit on this one. Jessica is a cheating slut. No proof hubby Matt even knows what she's up to with "best friend." Matt wants a stranger but she picks guys she's known for 10 years and he's OK with it? Nope. Hoping Matt learns what's happening and takes a baseball bat to this scum guy and kicks his skank wife to the curb.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great little fantasy, well written and erotic, with a romantic edge. I love the ‘bullshit’ comment about a fantasy! The commenter seems to believe he’s caught you out in writing something imaginary…. Looking for part 2. Don’t forget ‘phone photos are date stamped.

Bargyn1Bargyn1over 1 year ago

Looking forward to next episode!

timman65timman65about 1 year ago

Could be really good stuff. But please proofread your work. The spelling and grammar errors threw me off.

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