by EVILTROTO
This is the best story I've read here in years. Charming ideas and excellent writing talent, put together a charming story that is so mature and unconventional. well done.
Dear.
The story you wrote is one of the best stories written in recent years and published on this site. Excellent writing talent, charming ideas, strong erotic atmosphere, very stimulating story. There is an atmosphere of great passion and great love in this story.
It is worth investing a little more work in improvement and more detailed and longer descriptions. Hope to meet more of your stories soon. You are definitely exceptional in the quality of writing.
I'm sure many are waiting for more of your stories with bated breath. Write and don't drive your writing fans crazy.