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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Your writing has potential, but is plagued with typos.

You have potential.

I get the sense that English is your 2nd language.

Maybe get a proofreader.

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Hello, everybody over there. I write erotic stories about mind control. It's mostly a hobby, but I do my best to keep my stories consistent with the rules of their own world. If you want to send me an idea for a story, I'm willing to pay attention to it, I'm not sure I'll ev...