All Comments on 'Dickgirl Conquest'

by Lara_Longstaff

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arrowglassarrowglassover 8 years ago
What a HOT fantasy!

Oh to be a somewhat submissive butt slut...LOL!!!!!!!

mrstanleymrstanleyover 8 years ago
Very Hot

I hope you write another chapter. I love the toe sucking. I write as well. I usually have some sandal fetish toe sucking in my stories. The huge shemale cock was sexy. The ass rimming was hot as well.

WhiskeyIsGoodWhiskeyIsGoodover 8 years ago
I kept thinking I had read this somewhere before

Then I remembered, I have downloaded it from Amazon on my Kindle lol. Good to see it on Literotica now too.

tar_90tar_90over 8 years ago
Hope there's a part 2

Where we can see Joe maybe get a little top action. Or even just a part 2. Keep up the great work, please!

GeneraZGeneraZover 8 years ago
Brilliant!

Keep it up, this is great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please continue!

That was amazing please give it a whole series!

striker_1909striker_1909over 8 years ago
Hottest Story Ever

I just came instantly after watching this story.

blkirklin2blkirklin2over 8 years ago
Awesome!!!

Very hot story!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Awesome story. Wish for part 2: let Joe become more confortable in his role as the bottom, discovering that he greatly prefers being fucked over fucking. Also make him discover that he enjoys a slight humiliation related to his penis size, especially in comparison to hers. If you want to take it to even kinkier levels, perhaps have him put on a chastity device on his dick, and a dog collar on his neck, being led around with a leash by her.

Sucker4BoobiesSucker4Boobiesover 8 years ago
Fucking hot

This story even had ME considering ass-play. Well done!

skywriter62skywriter62over 8 years ago
Awesome story!

Very well written!! Maybe the best you have written here! Excellent pen name too! Sign me up for the fan club!! :) Happy Holidays!

PerimedesPerimedesover 8 years ago
Excellent Story

Very well written, my dear. I know it's all just fantasy, but inquiring minds want to know; what happened to her girly bits?

Perhaps a sequel to further explore this burgeoning relationship? Does she like to be penetrated, how and even where?

Regardless, I enjoyed it immensely! Kudos!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A Happy Ending

And they lived happily ever after...

ttrfanaticttrfanaticalmost 8 years ago
Superb Writing

I'll throw my vote in for a sequel (or a few) to this story. You definitely have a way with words and a great imagination. Definitely made me think I was there!

Benzguy280Benzguy280almost 8 years ago
Great Story

Great story, well written ready for more. Would love to be Joe!

KenGoreKenGorealmost 8 years ago

I agree with ttrfanatic a sequel is required for this story.

rfhh1959rfhh1959over 7 years ago
You are amazing

Each story better than the last

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Enjoyed,but...

This was a second read for me. I know you like exaggerated endowments but this was such a good story with a "real" feel that I felt a 16 inch organ took away from the story. 10, 11 or even 12 inches it would have resonated better. 16 just drove it from Trans to scifi. Yes I saw the disclaimer but was prepared for a more fantasical story.

Buildings_Cool71Buildings_Cool71almost 7 years ago
This is part of your Futa World series?

You should put this as Part 05 (or after, if you plan to continue?) of your Futa World series since she makes a reference to the situations from that storyline.

Very enjoyable, by the way.

betabradbetabradalmost 7 years ago
I love your dick girl stories !

I would love to suck Allie's big cock and have her fuck me and make me her little bitch boi.

ajignatsajignatsover 6 years ago
I love the story

Fantastic story, it was exciting and hot

I would love to find a woman like that and be her bitch.

maverick12288maverick12288over 5 years ago
Holy shit

Loved this...hoping you expand on this

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithover 5 years ago
Happy and lusty ending

Poor Jenny, kicked to the curb just because she was self centered, controlling, bigoted, and just a bit too bitchy. Ha, she's the one that needs a sequel to straighten her out.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 5 years ago
Amazing!

I totally got into this story. You write so well about the character's inner experience, the attraction, the curiosity, the yearning, and the overwhelming qualities of the Experience. Mmmm. Thank you.

blade_rocknutblade_rocknutover 4 years ago

We need an addendum where Allie grudge fucks Jenny, just to give that ice queen a reason to act like she has a stick in her ass! Lol....

Fun story. :)

LilWang275x1LilWang275x1over 3 years ago
OMG

I SO want to be Joe!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great story. Part2?

Fantastic read. Hope you will writing a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Joe’s character is so bad it almost feels like a satire. This is the first time I have ever felt compelled to comment on a story on here because I just had to let you know uncomfortable the entire thing made me feel. It feels like a projection fantasy for a sad man.

Royse69Royse69about 3 years ago

very good read

I have dated women with 1000 insecurities, no matter how much you try to build their self confidence up, they will drag themselves down. They will also bring you down too.

I enjoyed the story very much thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

10 to 1, the Anony that stated "Joe's character is so bad" has commented on hundreds of stories using, "bad character, bad editing, bad development, etc. etc." because he (10 to 1 on gender also) has submitted stories that have not gained any traction.

I had recently read "My Transgender Neighbor" on a whim due to the high voting score. The topic is not really my cup of tea. I liked the story line on that one, so I gave this one a look and was not disappointed. I normally don't vote on stories that aren't "in my wheelhouse" because I feel I may not be entirely objective.

I gave MTN 5 stars as I did this one.

If you can garner interest in a story for someone who normally doesn't look in that direction, I feel it's because your talent for story telling transcends the topic.

In my opinion.

James999isJames999isover 2 years ago

Great story looking forward to more of your writing the other stories are great also the fantasy we wish could become reality have a good year peace to you

AHNuts00AHNuts00over 2 years ago

Boneriffic story and well told! I loved that Joe enjoyed Allies huge snake at both ends and also his shift in thinking! I'd be fun for Joe to get his cock into action too! Stiff and ready for the next chapter

DelsetDelsetover 2 years ago

Oh, I would *kill* for a chapter 2. Maybee with Joe's girlfriend trying to get him back and becoming submissive to Allie. Or, maybe, one of Allie's rivals at a local bar of 'her type' making a play for Joe and then becoming Allie's cohort in Joe's wildest dream.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Little shor

sissyboi69Aricsissyboi69Aricabout 2 years ago

What a great story, I would love to read more. Joe is so lucky he met Allie

Viper2424Viper2424about 2 years ago

Loved it. Really well written.

Rapier875Rapier875almost 2 years ago

Excellent, just a shame you only ever wrote three stories.

Rapier

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

Hawt!

11/10 Studded Cock Rings!!!!!

TexemayTexemay6 months ago

You had me going till you got to the 16 inches. Really?

Lawman01Lawman016 months ago

Loved it. Really want more sequels of this story.

Pethair63Pethair635 months ago

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AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

Got me so hard I had to stop and take care of my hard precum dripping cock and lick the cum off my hands!! 👅💦🤤😋

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