by Lara_Longstaff
I hope you write another chapter. I love the toe sucking. I write as well. I usually have some sandal fetish toe sucking in my stories. The huge shemale cock was sexy. The ass rimming was hot as well.
Then I remembered, I have downloaded it from Amazon on my Kindle lol. Good to see it on Literotica now too.
Where we can see Joe maybe get a little top action. Or even just a part 2. Keep up the great work, please!
Awesome story. Wish for part 2: let Joe become more confortable in his role as the bottom, discovering that he greatly prefers being fucked over fucking. Also make him discover that he enjoys a slight humiliation related to his penis size, especially in comparison to hers. If you want to take it to even kinkier levels, perhaps have him put on a chastity device on his dick, and a dog collar on his neck, being led around with a leash by her.
Very well written!! Maybe the best you have written here! Excellent pen name too! Sign me up for the fan club!! :) Happy Holidays!
Very well written, my dear. I know it's all just fantasy, but inquiring minds want to know; what happened to her girly bits?
Perhaps a sequel to further explore this burgeoning relationship? Does she like to be penetrated, how and even where?
Regardless, I enjoyed it immensely! Kudos!
I'll throw my vote in for a sequel (or a few) to this story. You definitely have a way with words and a great imagination. Definitely made me think I was there!
Great story, well written ready for more. Would love to be Joe!
This was a second read for me. I know you like exaggerated endowments but this was such a good story with a "real" feel that I felt a 16 inch organ took away from the story. 10, 11 or even 12 inches it would have resonated better. 16 just drove it from Trans to scifi. Yes I saw the disclaimer but was prepared for a more fantasical story.
You should put this as Part 05 (or after, if you plan to continue?) of your Futa World series since she makes a reference to the situations from that storyline.
Very enjoyable, by the way.
I would love to suck Allie's big cock and have her fuck me and make me her little bitch boi.
Fantastic story, it was exciting and hot
I would love to find a woman like that and be her bitch.
Poor Jenny, kicked to the curb just because she was self centered, controlling, bigoted, and just a bit too bitchy. Ha, she's the one that needs a sequel to straighten her out.
I totally got into this story. You write so well about the character's inner experience, the attraction, the curiosity, the yearning, and the overwhelming qualities of the Experience. Mmmm. Thank you.
We need an addendum where Allie grudge fucks Jenny, just to give that ice queen a reason to act like she has a stick in her ass! Lol....
Fun story. :)
Joe’s character is so bad it almost feels like a satire. This is the first time I have ever felt compelled to comment on a story on here because I just had to let you know uncomfortable the entire thing made me feel. It feels like a projection fantasy for a sad man.
very good read
I have dated women with 1000 insecurities, no matter how much you try to build their self confidence up, they will drag themselves down. They will also bring you down too.
I enjoyed the story very much thank you
10 to 1, the Anony that stated "Joe's character is so bad" has commented on hundreds of stories using, "bad character, bad editing, bad development, etc. etc." because he (10 to 1 on gender also) has submitted stories that have not gained any traction.
I had recently read "My Transgender Neighbor" on a whim due to the high voting score. The topic is not really my cup of tea. I liked the story line on that one, so I gave this one a look and was not disappointed. I normally don't vote on stories that aren't "in my wheelhouse" because I feel I may not be entirely objective.
I gave MTN 5 stars as I did this one.
If you can garner interest in a story for someone who normally doesn't look in that direction, I feel it's because your talent for story telling transcends the topic.
In my opinion.
Great story looking forward to more of your writing the other stories are great also the fantasy we wish could become reality have a good year peace to you
Boneriffic story and well told! I loved that Joe enjoyed Allies huge snake at both ends and also his shift in thinking! I'd be fun for Joe to get his cock into action too! Stiff and ready for the next chapter
Oh, I would *kill* for a chapter 2. Maybee with Joe's girlfriend trying to get him back and becoming submissive to Allie. Or, maybe, one of Allie's rivals at a local bar of 'her type' making a play for Joe and then becoming Allie's cohort in Joe's wildest dream.
What a great story, I would love to read more. Joe is so lucky he met Allie
Got me so hard I had to stop and take care of my hard precum dripping cock and lick the cum off my hands!! 👅💦🤤😋