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Click hereWoke up to the biggest smile, brown eyes full of admiration, "Best night of my life.." Don't know if I should explain, all that warm skin, billowy cushions, both of us stayed quite a while talking. Her childhood in England, moving to America. Only sex she has had in years was jilling off to stories on Literotica. Bless his soul Uncle Ogg passed away recently, wrote a lot of stories, she might start writing in his honor. Probably won't be as good, first story is going to be about getting fucked by a Hero!
Epilogue
Proposed to Taylor at her college graduation, we have two boys. I went and got a teacher certificate, taught fifth grade math and science then became a high school guidance counselor, go figure. All the characters remained close for the rest of their lives, stories they could tell..
- COMMENTS
Davester3710 months agoNot my cup of tea. There might be a kernel of a good story in there, but it’s way overdone to the point that it’s ridiculous. The writing is so bad that it’s very hard to read. Nope.
Teacher4410 months agoYour writing style made this a difficult read. Lack of proper sentence structure makes even a good plot a poor story.
LenardSpencer10 months agoI thought I was having a metal seizure trying to follow the story! There is a reason why adverbs and adjectives exist, filling out sentences and paragraphs. Helping create actual storylines.
This read like a point listing of things. No real explanations, just 1, 2, 3, 4, etc.
No real explanation as to why all and sundry want to suck and fuck him, from day one. Nor any explanations why he also wants gay guys doing things to him and him wanting to fuck gays when he claims he isn't bi. I assure you, having a big cock does not suddenly cause every person he encounters to want to suck and fuck him. Particularly when he also seems to be mentally retarded, going by his actions and speech.
CrazyDaveTrucker6010 months agoThis story was all over the place for me, both good and bad, and I suspect that it was all by design. Would this be considered "stream of consciousness "? The story did have it's moments though. The bisexuality was a bit off putting for me, and then in the next sentence say he wasn't gay... wtf? The story felt like it was on heavy drugs at times, lucid at other times, almost with a dream like quality . I gave it four stars, there was a ton of effort there
Danglingpartofme10 months agoAuthorThank you for commenting Angst, personally I'm obsessed with dangling participles...
AngstIgnored11 months agoCouldn't make it through the confusing sentence structure, starting right out the gate. Gave up, sorry.
