All Comments on 'Dine & Dash Ch. 01'

I like your story and hope theres more but I don't like him I don't know how to explain it but he was an ass lol and they just met

Even the most submissive girl would not move that fast, like the theme but ease her into it.

Ridiculous. I can't believe that any girl, even a small town girl, would be that gullible, or that much in need of controlled sex. I also can't believe that any "city boy" would need to "troll" in the country.

He's not likeable, admirable or attractive because he is a pushy, presumptuous ass...not a sir or master. The well worn 'because my panties are wet' is not sufficient to support her allowing this type and level of treatment. Not for the alleged offense. Not from a blind date. Not in a public place. Not at all. The rapidity with which he took over is the basis of your fantasy in this chapter, but it is also the basis of the turn off many of us not into instant over power mentioned feel. But, you've made her the wide-eye, muddled - headed sheeple who deep down needs to be harshly dominated to find her true self. Do you have your bdsm checklist ready to tick off?