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by harry_saffron

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

He's untidy and weary looking, she's the epitome of a knockout and she can't wait to get up close and personal. Mmmm, I don't think so. No wonder you can't garner so much as one follower per story. Dismal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

4 Stars. It seemed to be written in a somewhat chopped cryptic style, like one of Dashiell Hammett's stories.

Britva415Britva415over 1 year ago

I like the twist, well done.

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I write mostly short stories due the big effort they require from me. I like to iterate over them: I review, print, mark them red, and edit and re-edit. I struggle with prepositions, continuity and other things but I put all the care I can. I hope you get to enjoy any or at l...