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All Comments on 'Dinner with BBW Jane'

by big_girls_are_my_weakness

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Whoa! Slow down, big guy!

The story has a lot of possibilities, but you're racing too fast. A little more time and a little more buildup would give a lot more heat. Just saying.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Beautiful

Awesome story, honest, real-I love it even as a bbw myself

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice.

Good story. Very little romance and kinda short but all in all not bad.

big_girls_are_my_weaknessbig_girls_are_my_weaknessover 4 years agoAuthor
A bit rushed

Agree with the comment on it being a bit too quick...

Always room for improvement.

RoperTraceRoperTraceover 1 year ago

Great example of how real dinner dates with a hot woman progress sometimes. No need for romance on a story like this one. This sounds more believable just the way you wrote it.

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