by AlexgetsHorny
Short but wonderful story. I never got laid because of skinny dipping, but it's still a fun experience.
Be careful with your editing, there were a few mistakes. For example, you wrote the "Want to go back to my place?" sentence very close together.
Well written story, brought back many memories of skinny dipping when younger.
Whoops, towards the end there you can tell you edited, but missed a quick little paragraph because it was in there twice. Not a huge deal, a couple books I've read recently did the same thing!
Never had this sort of skinny dipping experience, but my friend froze her nipples which was pretty painful! I thought she was exaggerating because mine were fine, but nope she froze them!
I think that this is a new writer. With more practice and better proofreading, he/she will do well. The words are there but they are sometimes in the wrong order which makes it harder to read or it’s just me. Fun story that could be expanded upon.
I stopped reading when you started with the spanking of her ass, sex is supposed to be fun, not painful, what is it with you guys who think it is ok to abuse women during sex, if you think that's fun how would you like getting punched in the balls while having sex, one star