All Comments on 'Dirty Little Secret'

Short, sweat and to the point. BUT----it left me wanting more---a bit better description of "events".

Still gave a 4 stars rating. Please keep writing. Doing good for a first entry.

Hope there’s a Part 2, because this is a fine Part 1. It definitely needs more to make it a complete story.

Incomplete

That's an opening for a story. A real story has a conclusion, this doesn't even have a cliffhanger. It just stops. Sorry you won a score of 2.

Why did you stop writing? This is nothing but the initial setup. Tons of potential, but no follow thru. 1*

Greg is not a 'good man' he's a boring limpster that cannot satisfy his woman. Yes, Greg can't take all the blame because any decent woman would have ditched him the second he showed his irredeemable inadequacies in bed.

Greg definitely needs to be cucked, with a pregnancy involved because his role in life should be nothing more than looking after and paying for another man's offspring.