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greyraven00greyraven00almost 3 years ago

While it is good on its own, I think this story is worth continuing in another chapter (or more) if you have the inclination.

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As Luke Luton, I write stories that could be described as erotic, bawdy, smut, good or bad or barely tolerable and (likely) many other ways, depending on your sensibilities and critical flair. As a writer, criticism, painful as it may be, is often a useful tool.  Do I have to...