by dumbsuckdoll
In real life, bad things happen to good people all the time. Nobody likes it, but that's just how life is. But in fiction, people expect a level of comeuppance. Bad things should happen to bad people and good things should happen to good people, even if bad things happen first. That's not what's going on here. You've provided no backstory as to what Jack ever did to deserve his tragic fate, nor what trauma Missy suffered for her end up with her horrible fate. And bestiality?! WTF? I got a story kicked back because I implied a 16-year-old flirted with her father, but here we have girls sucking off horses and dogs?! Who deserves that fate?