by HJO66
A good story but it ended too soon!! I hope there will a part two real soon!
I thought it was well thought out and written. I liked that you didn't rush through it. I have to admit I got hard when they cleaned each others fingers with their mouths. Looking forward to part 2 and thank you for sharing.
Your simmering sexual excitement is beautifully built within your story.
As a reader, I too felt the heat from within.
Nicely done.
Sorry: "mammaries" and "twat". No, no, no, not erotic at all, rather gross vocabulary in my opinion. Sorry again
A good story, hot but I think you repeat ourself a little too much in the first half and natter quite a bit. Otherwise I liked it a lot. 4/5 I'd say.
Great beginning of what to be an excellent multi-chapter of Mom and Daughter becoming lovers and get into the real nasty sex at home. You really have something great going here so please don't stop. Gave it a 5 for starters.
Love your style and sensuality - no other stories in a very long time have had me as erotically stimulated.
More, I want to hear how each one furiously fingers then buries its face in the others delicious and soaking wet hairy pussy