All Comments on 'Discovering Mom'

by HJO66

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I hope part two is on the way soon!

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 2 years ago
Thoroughly beautiful love story.

When two became one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Part two please.

Cant wait for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A good story but it ended too soon!! I hope there will a part two real soon!

Njdevils1Njdevils1over 2 years ago

I thought it was well thought out and written. I liked that you didn't rush through it. I have to admit I got hard when they cleaned each others fingers with their mouths. Looking forward to part 2 and thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Your simmering sexual excitement is beautifully built within your story.

As a reader, I too felt the heat from within.

Nicely done.

rainsolrainsolover 2 years ago

what a geat beginning, cant wait for more.

Only_connectOnly_connectover 2 years ago

Sorry: "mammaries" and "twat". No, no, no, not erotic at all, rather gross vocabulary in my opinion. Sorry again

Phoenix_LusterPhoenix_Lusterover 2 years ago

A good story, hot but I think you repeat ourself a little too much in the first half and natter quite a bit. Otherwise I liked it a lot. 4/5 I'd say.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excellent buid up, not to long. Definitely need a part 2. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please don’t end i5 there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great beginning of what to be an excellent multi-chapter of Mom and Daughter becoming lovers and get into the real nasty sex at home. You really have something great going here so please don't stop. Gave it a 5 for starters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love your style and sensuality - no other stories in a very long time have had me as erotically stimulated.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Boring

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great start. 5 stars. We need a part 2 already!

ddmc1701ddmc1701over 1 year ago

Lovely story please write a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

More, I want to hear how each one furiously fingers then buries its face in the others delicious and soaking wet hairy pussy

Sex_CrazedSex_Crazed5 months ago

Where is part 2? Judging by the comments, people want it.

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Update- I have just recently re-edited all of my material as of mid-December 2023, and it should all be surfaced by the new year.