All Comments on 'Discovering my cuckold parents'

Terrible job of editing

I could turn this into a real story. Possibly with time you will improve. Editing is going to be a must and your descriptions need to improve a lot. Word choices are not exactly great. For example, "buxom" is just plain silly.

Wish there was a pix of Mom :P

Hot incestuous story with cuckoldry and lust of all the characters. But there were lots of silly grammatical errors, which could be due to fast writing. You need to be attentive to such errors. But otherwise, it's a real hot story. Can we expect another sequel to the story with the narrator confronting his parents?