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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fuck!!! The tension of the climb, the technical details of how every move unfolds, with the uncertainty of whether a risky move will work or if it will be your last, interwoven with the intimacy of the the 'non-climbing' paragraphs was impressive. I was holding my breath and my body tensed up as I could feel myself to be there on that cold, unyielding rock face, then the relief of the warmth of the softness of the bodies. Mmmm, lovely stuff x

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