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Click hereWe replayed the entire night over and over on the drive home. There is absolutely no question that my hubby enjoyed watching. He told me he was in the washroom for so long because he didn't want me to see the tent in his pants. We both want to do it again but have agreed that we should do it somewhere further away.
To be continued.....
Didn’t rate so as not to bring your score down. You didn’t even spellcheck, never mind self edit.
Your paragraphs are too long.
Would have given you a two but I don’t want to discourage you from writing again.
Yes, I agree with the editor comment. Also, how old is Voyherwife? You kept calling their erections a "boner"! I mean, that's teenager language. Plus, the premise that a husband would agree to play a game where there is a situation of his wife getting gang-raped! Just isn't believable. With even more guys arriving to "watch" the show, the danger of it all was ridiculous. Even more that now she is being blackmailed to return to be fucked by a big "boner".
Oh wow for your first story I give it all 5 stars! Omggggg, the vision you give is incredibly hot & had me very aroused! Can't wait for the rest of the story now,wooooo! Great Job!