All Comments on 'Divide and Conquer'

I feel a little like the victim of a bait-and-switch with that ending, but the whole thing was written very well. Bravo!

Love it! The MC must be part Klingon and follows the old Klingon proverb "Revenge is a dish best served cold”. 5 star story for me!

This story is jerk off fantasy for eer bellied, lazy, sexually lethargic, sexually unimaginative, and sexually lazy men who live inside delusion believing their wives had it good.

They are pathetic in every way and permeate this site both as writers and commenters

Don't stop reading too soon. Things aren't as they seem!

Love it...let the skank fall back in love with you then yank the rug out from under her.

2nd read. I’d forgotten that he burned her at the end. Even though the writing was good, I hated that there was no forgiveness in his heart. Would rather have it end with reconciliation as it appeared he initially wanted. Just my preference. Gave it a 3 on the 1st read and a 2 this time. People make mistakes. Nobody goes to those lengths to end up dumping her anyway.

One of this writer's best.

Outstanding! Well played! I, along with many others I'm sure, was afraid he was going to accept her back unconditionally. He would have forever been a cuck in his mind, Ann's mind, and especially Mark's mind. Again, job well done!

"....for the love of God, Montresor...", good literary references are worth their weight, are they not?

A well read reader

Stubbyone below is very disappointed the husband didn’t gladly eat the creampies the wife was offering. Can’t the cucks around here catch a fatal STD from all the creampies they love to swallow? R. H.

Second reading I too had forgotten the MC divorced the wife. A well written story. I would not want to share a campfire with any of the characters.

Stubbyones comment sounds just like what a cuck would say. LM

great ending

Wondered through the whole first part why he would go to the effort to try to win the whore back. Excellent ending explains it all.

Awesome ending.

Loved the ending!!!

MMMMMM Just that bit different from the normal, nice paced good ideas for a payback

Fucking asshole husband

Was concerned that you were going to end with a reconciliation.

The bitch deserved what came to her

Awwwww

Ic69hunter's little cocktail weenie just deflated at the end of the story....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Very good ending, the bitch got what she deserved.

5/5stars

jopstorm1945

Read before. Great ending.

Good story. One hole in the plot I think. He swapped batteries in her cell phone with a dead battery so she’d have to use the landline. However, unless that battery in her phone was totally unchargeable, she would have charged it and in a few hour could have received his phone calls.

5 stars This was and excellent story.

Thankfully he don’t rollover belly up for her.

Well crafted and executed. Believable.

So he was reading Poe, that's kind of special, especially for a golfer.

All that effort for so little gain. She wasn't giving up the guy that was making the effort, he was just fake, she was giving up the guy that was a lazy boring golf playing cuck of the weeks, months, years before that drove her to having an affair.

I'm sure cuckboy will be able to use Poe and golf to get over being newly single.

Honestly though, the writing was good, the story and plot well done, just let down by the petty ending. Petty because like many of these LW stories the husband's conception of love is so limited and shallow, tied as it generally is to ego and a sense of ownership.

If this had ended in reconciliation, I'd have been fine with it, but as it is, I'm actually quite dissatisfied with the ending.

The husband looks to have been one of those put-minimal-effort into the marriage husbands before he discovered the infidelity. Then suddenly, he puts in all the effort he should have been putting in all the time from the beginning, only to hurt her. What a loser.

Another author on this site used this Poe quote as a coda too. What made that one strange is that the cuckolded husband commits suicide. As I said in a comment on that story "suicide as impunity? Methinks not."

Typical of these two anons, they're the true losers, when did it ever say he put minimal effort into the marriage because clearly the other guy wasn't putting effort into his either, he's also a fake, you whine about a sense of ego and ownership, if the roles were reversed, for example, with Mark and Bobbi, you're not saying those same words, double standards, shut up with your hypocrisy, like I said all or at least most anons just whine and hide, you're probably cucks and don't have the guts nor balls to stand up to your SOs, maybe you should do that before they take away your internet privileges.

Ignore all anondicks, the tale was well conceived and had the essential unexpected twist. Well done

i didn't see that coming . he didn't ask her why though ?? i would at least have wanted to know that much .

Loved it! Showed her what she threw away and then pulled the rug out from under her! Once a cheater always a cheater!

I was ready to give negative stars for this one. Who would fight to keep that cheating bitch. Breaking the cheaters up and send proof to all parties, then divorce the Bitch. Fantastic 5*

Get R Done.

My God she is so dumb! Any idiot could work out somebody was interferring in the affair and the change in behaviour of her husband should have told her who. She got what she deserved just for being so stupid.

The BTB crowd is like a pack of hyenas. They were ready to eviscerate the writer over an impending RAAC. With the plot twist, the charging pack was stopped cold. They got their fix, their sop, their dose of hate. It must be sad to focus on characters in an amateur story and invest so much anger in the fictional outcome of a made-up story. Then, if it's not to their liking, they turn on the author who gave them a FREE story! How messed up is that?

When some cheats with importunity all they think of is themselves, so unless they are checking the reaction of others carefully, they make mistakes. As those mistakes increase the more they are likely to be found out. One of the common ones is when they do sexual things the spouse or partner has never done or has been refused to be done, how they dress, or a good one is how their persona changes. The down side is when the spouse trusts the other one, being blindsided, is a heinous and selfish act.

Worked well, thanks!

Excellent story, well played out! 5*

If he planned to divorce her, the past few weeks were unnecessary. Just show her the photos and file. Four stars.

JPB

If he had treated the slut and the other man to the punishments of Poe, THEN, it would’ve been a truly great story!

ZK

Why go to all the trouble of the "divide and conquer" if he was going to divorce her anyway? Seems like a big waste of time. Seems like sending the evidence to family (and possibly friends) would have been more than enough humiliation and pain for her.

Except the very next day she was back with Mark and after both their divorces they moved in together, married 6 months after the divorce was finalised and pregnant with twins (a LW favorite) 6 months after that.

While she may have regretted how it ended with Mack, being a pragmatist she was happy to move on to Mark and the man sized cock he wielded.

Poor old Mack spent his days playing golf like a true cuckold, and rueing the day he stopped being able to satisfy his now ex-wife.

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Such a stupid end. For this to have worked the affair would have had to completely cool down, and even then there's no way of stopping it from igniting again, especially if all impediments were removed.

To all the smooth brains who wonder WHY OP did this, go read the last three paragraphs again. Sheesh... reading comprehension, ya know?

Cheers, Muggly

I get what you were going for and I generally really liked the story, but I still felt a bit ambivalent about his "revenge". I mean, he DID smack her at an emotionally vulnerable time and rubbed her nose in it, so that much seems like it went off without a hitch, but as others pointed out - the "end" of the affair between Mark and Ann seemed far from conclusive. If there had been more acrimony, then I think it would have been perfect.

Generally, I enjoy the author's stories. This one left me scratching my head?

I don't get that people don't understand this. It was a total burn, and a complete surprise at that. Very nice job! A downer of a story, because she threw away his love. I was thinking it would be a reconciliation right up until their final conversation. Nicely done!

Wonderful. If I found more than 5 degrees I would vote 10