All Comments on 'Divya Pt. 02: Delightful Distraction'

Hey, Author’s note here: I like to associate music with scenes, you can use the lyrics provided to get the songs for the karaoke section if you also like to visualise with music. Added bonus, the part at the end where Divya starts masturbating, in my mind’s eye would have Dancing With Myself by Billy Idol start playing and carry over into a credits sequence

Really, really, really good. Can't wait until the next chapter.

Thank you for sharing your work, Secret_Bard. This was great. I can't wait to read more.

Thank you for sharing your work, Secret_Bard. This was great. I can't wait to read more.

I loved both chapters. More Valerie!

Checking back every day for a new update! Excellent story.

Update on the progress of chapter 3: it’s coming. My apologies for making you wait. I had a writing frenzy with the first two chapters and I’m currently about 5000 words into chapter three. I’m pushing through slowly, hoping for another burst of energy or to just slowly power through. Whole story is planned out though. Should be 5 chapters total and maybe a bonus chapter afterward.

Checking back all the time for the next chapter!

Same, it's not every month that you get a good docking story :) In fact I wish the docking gets more extreme!

@agerestriction0322 New chapter should be uploaded very soon, it’s complete and I’ve just submitted. It’s got the same docking as the first chapter, but I plan on a bit more extreme version in future chapters. You could possibly already guess what I mean by that, but I’ll let you sit in suspense till I finish writing those future chapters.