by NemoHoes
What a great start, I hope to read more. Definitely a 4.0
Too similar to many other stories of this type. If you could think of some sort of different approach it would improve your story.
He has the Black Nurse to go see and go see his ex Boss to get his jib back and get a Raise. Not to mention setting up a Harem. he is Young,Dumb and Full of Cum. with No Responsibilities.
Definitely needed some more development story-wise, but overall a pretty good start =)
It was at this line that I rolled my eyes and stop reading.
Nice to read a story who is not entirely focused on his own dick, and loves pleasing a pussy.