All Comments on 'Do Cyborgs Dream of Toasters?'

Good start. Look forward to more.

Very good, especially for the first time!

The snarky robot comments need to be integrated /shortened. Put them in the dialog not separate paragraphs.

That's the stupidest title ever, since everyone knows that cyborgs, just like androids, dream of toasters with a picture of electric sheep on it.

Good writing, BTW.

Decent development of characters.

Good story, and Nicely set up for possible continuations.

I found the sex to be a bit robotic, just kidding. Enjoyed the story. Please continue.

I really hope that this is not a one off. If it is, you should be stricken from the Literotica writer’s list.

It had better NOT be "The End" ;^) ;^)

Thanks so much for the feedback, everyone! It's so encouraging to hear that some of you liked it.

This was really fun to write, and I'm working on ideas for the sequel.

A great first effort. Thank you for sharing.

Good start! Keep going, it's worthwhile.

What a great story. Characters drew you in and I really want to know what happens next.

Fucking hell that was hot!